The second beat drop after the growing middle part could be more spectacular and from there I think some ducking for the kicks would be cool.
And to get some alternation, just mute everything exept the melodies and the hats, kick or any drumpart for one step, in my sequenzer looks like this:
and sounds like this @ sec 7:
sounds horible but just to show what i mean xD
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like your track
i'm already looking for the next version you release
go go go